I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Andrew, You have done a really good job on writing your story and I enjoyed reading it. You may want to repost it because it's a bit confusing! Good job
Hi Andrew, You have done a really good job on writing your story and I enjoyed reading it. You may want to repost it because it's a bit confusing! Good job
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